27 July 2016

Deck Roof

When we came back from the holidays something had changed at school. We wondered what had happened to the deck covers.







A bird ate the screws and it bit the screws.
By Josie

The roof rabbit climbed on the roof.
By Byron

The giant had a screwdriver.
By William

The thunder blew the cover down. The wind blew the cover down.

By Indy



The flying pig took the shade sail down.
By Tyler

The giant came to take the bolts out.
By Cameron

The thunder took the shade sails down.
By Jack
The mouse undid the screws. The wind came to blow the cover away.
By Lucas

The bird is pecking the screws. The giant lifted the roof off.
By Lochlan

The tornado took the roof off.
By Rafael

The mouse stole the screws. The owl took the screws.
By Maggie

On Wednesday some builders came to put on a new roof. 

The builder is climbing up the ladder.
By Aiden

Mr Callaghan took the shade sails down. The shade sails were cracked and they had rain on them. The men are using hammers and screwdrivers. The deck is dangerous because it is slippery.
By Sofia

You can’t go past the cones because they are fixing the roof.
By Isla

I think Mr Callaghan took it down to fix. He is going to use a hammer to fix the roof. I think it is going to get fixed.
By Jake

The builders are putting the new roof on.
By Grace

I know you can’t go by the builder because it is dangerous. You can’t be where the builder is because they are working hard.
By Amelia



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